This is a discussion on First Sig Attempt - Opinions and Feedback Welcome within the Artistic Inspiration forum, part of the Off Topic Chat; Hey guys,
Been inspired by all the great signatures that I have seen on here, so thought I would have ...
Nice job on your first sig, much better than my first attempt.
There is a hint of depth, but her shoulder kinda ruins it. The text looks fine, but I think it would be better if it was moved closer to her breast (Save the b00bs!). Sometimes darkening the edges a bit (left and right edges) can help the depth just a little bit, and this sig would work well with that. Most of the render's lighting is coming from the left side, so that's where your main light source would be. You can just make a new layer, use the Liner Dodge (Addition) blending option, and add a large white spot to your light source, using a soft brush. Lower the Fill when you think it's too bright. With practice you'll get better at these things.
That's all I have to say about that sig, keep practicing and you'll get better. Also, you should pay attention to CnC (Comments 'n Critique) when you get it, for it's used to help you improve.