I feel kinda embarassed telling you this, but now that mty summer has started I'm going to continue writing a book I started a few months back.
I've always wanted to write a book but my ideas are usually just 'guy goes here, blows everything up.' This one is still about fighting in a way but I've really thought it out and have, what I think, is an interesting story with plenty of twists.
Below I'm going to copy out a draft of the blurb (overview of story on back page) and I would appreciate it if some of you could leave some feedback. Please try to be constructive, don't just say 'it sucks', actually give me a reason and maybe recommend some changes. Also, don't feel the need to lie to me and say you like it, be honest please! Oh, it's about vampires (don't worry, not any of that sparkly Twilight bull).
Here goes :
''The year is 2,314.Planet Earth is on the brink of armageddon. In a desperate attempt to survive, the wealthy have decided to abandon society, planning to colonise Jupiter, a planet that over time has evolved into a habitable safezone. The many secrets of the Universe have by now been revealed.
Apart from one. The Underworld. A hidden city buried deep within the core of Jupiter, inhabited by the once tormented souls of Earth, neglected and hated, reborn as half-human, half-demon.
The Order of Blood, a clan of modern-day vampires, have a duty to protect planet Earth. But when the Order's arch enemies, the Wulven Tribe, help spark a world war between the rich and the poor, 3 Blood Brothers from the Order face a monumental decision; Do they finally reveal themselves and face the dire consequences in order to stop the colonisation, or do they leave humanity to its impending doom?''
Well there you go, once again I'll say that that is only a draft, so don't take it too seriously. Thankyou to anybody who reads it and comments